Monday, April 13, 2009

IT'S A BOY GAL THING - II

Hero : “Where is the train halting now?”
The Man : “Its in the yard.. New Delhi Rly Station…”

Hero gets down from his upper birth… Not much surprised but a lil pist off to not find his shoes…

Hero : “Shoes??.. Where are my shoes?”The Man (Laughs) : “kids who come to the yard to take away the left overs… must have taken your shoes.. by the way.. your luggage is at the security.. show ur ticket and collect it from there..”

Hero moves out… collects his bag from security.. Barefoot he walks out of New-Delhi station towards the Taxi Stand……

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Heroine : Hey, I gotta talk to you regarding something. Bolun…Hero : Permission granted.. shoot.
Heroine : Wo… Can we go somewhere else?
Hero : You can speak up here.. not a problem maam.
Heroine : Yaar, wo kya hai na ki… I really like you! And…..
Hero kinda got the clue of whats gonna come. He was looking in her eye and could sense the amount of nervousness she was going thru.. but still he waited…. Looking straight at her…

Heroine got a little more nervous and she just lowered her eyes as she could not muster the courage to look into the eyes of a very good friend and see that her words to follow might end up her loosing him forever.. confused.. and still eyes lowered.. she continued………

Heroine : I know its kinda weird and.. and.. I may not be that lucky.. But.. but.. I couldn’t keep it within myself any more… for past few days or.. or… may be weeks I kinda.. kinda.. have fallen for you…
Hero still looking at her.. amazed and confused himself… he doesn’t know what to say so he just kept hmmming all the while she spoke.. at the back of his head what was going on were several emotions… “wow.. I couldn’t believe it”.. “oh shit.. what am I supposed to say.. yes.. no..”.. “yeppe”… “yaar should I better ask for some time?”.. phew…….

She looked at him… saw the expression on his face… a little pessimism surrounded her and the immediate thought was “I shouldn’t have done it.. shit”.. gathering some courage and noticing that the hero is avoiding to look at her….. she continued….

Heroine : I know I shouldn’t have said it.. but.. but.. hmmm.. nothing.
No one spoke for quite some time… Hero continued to look away from her… deep in thought.. thinking what to say… Heroine continued to stare at her tea… waiting for the hero to speak.. thinking… “gotdamit say something stupid”..

Hero : Coffee? I mean…. Not here… may be somewhere else?Heroine (nervous and confused.. doesn’t have any clue what the hero gotta say) : Hmmm. Ok.
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They have their coffee waiting at their place.. Hero sipping the coffee.. and heroine staring and stirring her coffee continuously… she is more confused than ever.. no one spoke.. Hero had no idea of how to begin and what to say… Heroine had already done her part.. she cannot do anything but wait……

Hero passes a piece of paper to her.. it read….

“Hey, the coffee is pleading… please drink me maam. :)”
Heroine smiles… Puts down the spoon and takes a sip… and wrote back…

“So what does the coffee say now.”

“Thanks..” Wrote Hero.

She smiles.. musters the courage and writes….. “So…….”

“Yaar”.. Hero begins to write… Heroine sips her coffee in the meanwhile… tensed from within of wats going to come….. Hero continues….

“Yaar.. you know how it is… I have just been thru a rough patch and trust me I do not wanna commit the same mistakes again. I know you mut have given it a 100 thoughts before coming over… but… I lost a friend earlier, I don’t wanna loose you….. I mean.. I just donno wat to say….”
“Carry on”… She wrote.

“Yaar, dekh… its like….. I donno how u gonna take this… but.. neways…. You know what.. I had a huge crush on you sometime back… but I thot u try to keep a hand distance from people… I mean the way you are… Taking it as stupid infatuation.. and to top it.. never getting any chance to talk to u that time… I moved ahead….. I seriously liked you a lot.. and I like you even this day…. But… you know how it is…..”

“Confused… you are confused.. and making me a lot more”..

“Well…” Pauses for sometime before penning down his final words… Finally he wrote…

“Well…I need some time.”
She did not write any reply to this and returned the paper…… Hero reacts… expressions literally asking her “What? What does that mean?” and gave back the paper to her…. She wrote….

“:)”

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A well decorated bedroom…. And a nice looking cosy bed… The paper conversation at coffee well framed and kept on one side of the bed… and a closeup of the Hero and Heroine on the other side…… Hero sleeping.. and Heroine enters the room.. a lil in a hurry… She calls out….

“Get up…. You will be late for office…”
No reaction from the hero.. He doesn’t move at all… She moves towards him.. takes his arm.. and tries to pull him off the bed……

“Get up.. get up…. You cant sleep all day like this… get up..!!!”
Hero opens his eyes…. Smiles.. looks around… It took him a couple of seconds to realise… that he was sleeping in a railway compartment.. and another couple of seconds to recollect why he was here… After coming to his senses he asked the person who was trying all the while to wake him up…

Hero : “Where is the train halting now?”
The Man : “Its in the yard.. New Delhi Rly Station”

Hero gets down from his upper birth… Not much surprised but a lil pist off to not find his shoes…

Hero : “Shoes??.. Where are my shoes?”
The Man (Laughs) : “kids who come to the yard to take away the left overs… must have taken your shoes.. by the way.. your luggage is at the security.. show ur ticket and collect it from there..”

Hero moves out… collects his bag from security.. Barefoot he walks out of New-Delhi station towards the Taxi Stand……………

11 comments:

priyanka said...

mast tha be !!

deepshikha said...

"fiction" eh..??? it's a lil difficult to believe tht.. :D

nyways it was a real nice post.. :)

MJ said...

i second dipsy..
fiction nahin lagti ye rupesh baabu..
nywayz.. if u say so..

waise.. kahaani abhi baaki hai dost ...

Rup said...

@deeps and MJ

why do u think its not a fiction -> one good reason!

@MJ

kahani baaki hai bole to? bole to?

MJ said...

hmm one gud reason could be chor ki daadi mein tinka ..
hmmm??

aur kahani baaki hai kyunki it aint complete u see :).. hee hee

Rup said...

@MJ..

Aisa kuch nahi hai... theek hai?? there is no chor and no tinka at all........

and the kahani is complete.. as far as i see it!!!!

I donno why is everyone so confused.. :(

Firefly said...

Nice attempt!!!...

I am pretty sure this is not Fiction Rups!!!... :P


Love and Care
Sur!

ag said...

dammit yaar.. y dont u leave ur stupid job n just start writing books, or even better scriptwriting for movies...

yeah, story does seem to b a fiction but not complete.. u knw curiosity kills the cat.. so when v meet next, u may cont story :)

|M|O|H|I|T| said...

hey, nice piece. seems to be inspired by some real life story. is it? oh wait, is it your's? :D

Sargam said...

Confused.... :)

technicolour said...

Hey Shivee..

Why confused? Dont be. :)

TC