Sunday, November 02, 2008

IT'S A BOY GAL THING..




The sweet silent early morning… golden rays… cool breeze.. melodious chirping of birds……the silent streets getting ready for another lovely day ahead……

“Pehla Nasha… Pehla Khumar….” The background score…
A boy next door.. A casual wrangler denim.. a simple yellow teee… bag hanging on one shoulder.. Hands in the pockets… ear phones playing some music.. and his legs taking each step ahead in rhythm…An simple gal… red salwaar suit… long hair kissing her cheeks… a pair of maroon bangles in each arm.. long and heavy metal earrings.. compelling you to look at her beautiful face… kajal to immure you in her eyes… just a simple lip glosss.. looking down.. and moving ahead… on the same footpath.. towards the boy… still not in sight……“Naya Pyar hai naya Intezaaar…. Kar lun main kya apna haal..”She catches a sight of the guy… “Looks good”.. she thinks… “Is he actually good? Will he look at me?? What should I do? Should I look at him.. or should I keep staring at the concrete?”“Wow.. what a morning!!”.. thinks he. “And a gal in red… nothing can be better than this… her walk reveals that she is good.. oh god.. is she beautiful?? Should I look at her? NO… she would take me as another jerk.. Guess I should not look at her…..”“Ohh.. he is tall… is he handsome?? He should be!! Should I give him a smile?? He wont take me wrong?? Or will he?? God help me……” Heart beating faster than ever.. getting faster every second… getting faster with every step that brings her closer to him…Takes his right hand off from him pocket… runs his fingers through his hair..
Puts off some streaks of hair from over her face to tug it back of her ear.. takes the corner of her dupatta.. rolls it on her fingers… smiling at herself…. She keeps moving…….Pulls off his earphones… couldn’t stop himself from looking at her.. “Oh.. she is sweet.. looks better in red.. Thank god she aint looking at me” Feels she would raise her eyes.. nervously starts looking somewhere else…..
“Is he looking at me?” Pulls down her dupatta a lil… checks her steps.. looks at the guy with her corner eyes.. “Why is he not looking at me?? Idiot”

“Aee dile bekarar… Mere dile bekarar… Tu hi bata…”
About to cross her.. He couldn’t resist anymore… tries to look straight at her… “Ohh she is so so pretty… look at me goddamit…!! What is there on that stupid black concrete…..” tick tick 1.. tick tick 2…..
She turns all of a sudden… could not resist.. their eyes meet… he smiles… she sighs… then smiles looking at the concrete.. raises her head again.. looking at each other.. they cross………… smiling they move ahead……
“Pehla Nasha.. Pehla Khumar… Naya Pyar hai Naya Intezaaar”

20 comments:

deepshikha said...

OMG Rupesh.. i cudnt help but smile at the end.. :) :)
totall hindi flick but the best thing i came across while sitting in office on a sunday..

Rup said...

he he...

thanks dipsy.... atleast it cud make ur sunday!! :D :D :D

tc

garima said...

cho chweet..i am waiting what happens next ;)

Rup said...

garima..

abe story yahin khatam... aage socha nahi maine...

:P

pioza said...

took me back to the "i have a crush on him days"... very nice

sharad said...

awesome description of something dat happens to me invariably every day :-)..seriously, u need 2 tell us all wat event triggered this post ;-)

Firefly said...

i love these kind of Stuff..I mean pure budding tinkling crush wala stuff..no matter these ppl wudnt meet again or be together forever this red suit girl wud never forget this guy and that ear phone guy wudnt forget the girl...


Sweet!!

Though i wud love to hear what triggered u to write this?

Ellen said...

Rupesh, this post reveals the romantic streak in you. :-) And the nicest thing bout it is -- it happens to everyone at least once in his/her lifetime. lols or many times hahah! :-) Some things never change, not even in 'first blush'.

I enjoy your writing a lot -- honest and real... can almost read your heart in it. :-)

Take care.
Blessings to you and your family.

Rup said...

Thanks pioza (puja) :P

Rup said...

he he he.. sharad.. i knew u wud like it.. more than anyone else!! :D :D :D

Rup said...

hi firefly,

welll.... nothing triggered this.. it was in my mind since long.. just didnt get any time to write it...

so u better not ask that question again...

:)

Rup said...

hey ellen,

thanks a ton for the comment... well i never expected u wud like it!!!

Thanks for the well wishes.. u take care too... :)

Soudhamini said...

Arey yaar..tum tho bahut bada scriptwriter nikhla...Gosh !! It wuz like one of Yashraj beginings..Awesome.

This tells me that you are very truthfull to urself.

Gr8 going..:)

Pankhuri said...

kitna cute hai...:)
agar aisa sachhi mein kabhi ho to kitna romantic hoga na bhaiya...!!

MJ said...

areey yar.. kya filmi kahaani..
background score ka bhi khayaal rakha gaya hai..
khoob TRP milengey :P

Rup said...

mini ji/ Panks / MJ,

Thanks for dropping by and thankf for the comments. Glad u all liked it for one reason or the other..

Keep coming!
:)

Divya said...

OMG!! This was so damn sweet!!! And it's something I guess that happens to everyone!!

ag said...

these things are like all pervading.. so common.. always in the air.. n still these things make u smile everytime u come across them...


nice one rups.. just like ur "any other ordinary blog"... :P :)

setting std for urself day-by-day n m getting more addicted to reading blogs with each passing day

Sensitive:-) Jigyasa said...

Rup

Inspired by Yash Chopra ji.....or actually you can feel love is in the air!!!

A rhythmic post!!!!

Sargam said...

Bade gaur se dekha hai aapne boy girl interaction? :) good narration and beautiful style.. and decent at the same time... lovely