Friday, February 11, 2011

MANN HAI...




us parchai se pare,
aaj jeene ka bada mann hai.
kaale thande aasman ke tale,
aaj kho jaane ka bada mann hai.

aasha aur nirasha se pare,
aaj jeene ka bada mann hai.
jugnuon ko fir se dekh chamakte,
aaj hasne ka bada mann hai.

khwabon ko rakh pare,
aaj jeene ka bada mann hai.
gunguna kar un yaadon ko,
aaj rone ka bada mann hai.

rakh panno aur shyahi ko pare,
aaj jeene ka bada mann hai.
do labz us ghazal ke,
aaj dohrane ka bada mann hai.

us parchai se pare,
aaj jeene ka bada mann hai.
kaale thande aasman ke tale,
aaj peene ka bada mann hai.


image: weheartit.com

10 comments:

Oooooops! said...

Ye Kaisa mann hai...:P Nice Composition..:)

pankaj said...

Amazing....mazaa aa gaya padh ke.

Rups said...

Thanks Guys! :)

pankaj said...

really everytime I am reading it...I m falling in love with it! Hats off to u...

Rups said...

are pankaj bhai.. :) :) dil garden garden ho gaya ki aapko ye itni pasand aa gayi..

maine to ye bahut hi jyada casually likha tha :) :)

but i am really glad u liked it so so much... thanks a ton!

priyanka said...

@rups: toh jiyo :)
achchi kavita likhi hai

Rups said...

priyanks...
Ohhh.. u read it.. :) :)
glad! i am.

Rup said...

priyanka,
and btw... tujhe to pata hi hai... i literally "lived" last night after writing this...
:D :D :D

Chintan said...

bahut badhia....! shayar ho gaye malum hote ho :P

Rup said...

Hey Chintz,
Main kahan shayar.. wo to jo bhi kuch hai bas aap logon se seekha hai :) :)